Mark Waid on storytelling: don’t waste your audience’s time

April 9th, 2009

Mark Waid is a comic book writer. You may have seen his name in the credits for the Flash comic books, and also in Kingdom Come, a mini-series about the current stable of Justice League superheroes, set 20 years in the future.

Waid posts regularly to Kung Fu Monkey, a blog about screenwriting, comic books, and any other geekery that the authors (and I) find amusing. His latest post on Kung Fu Monkey, “Waid Wednesdays #18: Don’t Waste My Time”, gives writers valuable advice on how to handle protagonist conflicts, and explains the difference between false suspense and genuine suspense.

Want to make your story stand out from the rest? Read Waid’s post here.

If you haven’t got time to read the whole post, here’s the bottom line:

Bottom line: don’t waste my time by asking questions with obvious answers or posing “suspenseful” choices with only one real option. That’s just marking time. People (and characters) (and situations) are only interesting when they surprise you.

Source: “Waid Wednesdays #18: Don’t Waste My Time” at the Kung Fu Monkey blog, URL: http://kfmonkey.blogspot.com/2009/04/waid-wednesdays-18-dont-waste-my-time.html (posted April 8th, 2009).

The best investment return I will receive this year

April 7th, 2009

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Superannuation. Copyright 2009 Evangeline Than.
(Be kind, I whipped this up quickly in the later part of the evening.)

I know that stimulus packages are all the rage now, but let’s not forget another way that we can get free money from the government.

It isn’t as sexy as getting cash to spend now, now, NOW (unless you think that securing your financial future is sexy, which I do), and gratification will be delayed, but with up to a 150% return on investment, it’s definitely one of the best deals I’ll be getting all year.

I’m talking about the Australian government’s super co-contribution initiative. It was introduced from the 1st of July, 2003, in order to help low and middle-income earners save for retirement.

Let’s face it, early career animators definitely fall into this group, and we need all the help we can get. I don’t know about you, but I’d rather not spend my twilight years on a tiny pension eating dog food.

Basically, if you meet the eligibility requirements, and make a personal super contribution to a complying super fund or retirement savings account before the 30th of June, the government will match it with a co-contribution up to a certain limit. In the best case scenario, if you are eligible, and your total income falls under the lower income threshold, you could be entitled to the maximum co-contribution amount of $1,500.

Are you eligible? Find out by visiting the Australian Tax Office’s super co-contribution page.

And now a giant disclaimer will follow.

Disclaimer: Evangeline Than has made every effort to ensure the information in this web site is accurate, however its accuracy, reliability or completeness is not guaranteed. Opinions expressed in this web site may change without notice. Evangeline Than is under no obligation to notify you or publish any amendment if she becomes aware of a change to, or inaccuracy in, this web site or subsequently forms a different opinion. No part of this web site is to be construed as a solicitation to buy or sell any security. Evangeline Than, in preparing this web site, did not take into account the investment objectives, financial situation and particular needs of any investor. Before making an investment decision on the basis of this web site, an investor or prospective investor needs to consider, with or without the aid of a licensed securities adviser, whether the advice is appropriate in light of their particular investment needs, objectives and financial circumstances.

Joel Trussell

April 5th, 2009

Wow-wow-wow. Check out illustrator and animator Joel Trussell’s new website out for some very cool retro style. I especially like his music videos.

Joel also has a blog (http://joeltrussell.blogspot.com/) where you can see what he’s been up to and working on. I’ve already subscribed to the feed. The links sidebar in his blog is a treasure trove of new artists to discover–I’ll get through them all one day!

Source: I first read about Joel on the Drawn! blog, URL: http://drawn.ca/2009/04/03/joel-trussells-new-site/ (posted April 3rd, 2009).

Mary and Max special screening at the Luna Leederville

April 4th, 2009

Two weeks ago I won a double pass to see a screening of Mary and Max, thanks to FTI, Luna Palace Cinemas and project Anomie.

It wasn’t just any old screening either. It was a SPECIAL screening (held on the 29th of March), followed by a Q & A with Adam Elliot (writer, director, Academy Award winner), and Melanie Coombs (producer, cheerleader, cajoler, magician).

Mary and Max is about the growing and evolving pen-friendship between Mary, a lonely eight-year-old girl from the Melbourne suburbs, and Max, an obese, Jewish, New Yorker with Asperger’s Syndrome. The film is wickedly observant and lovingly peppered with bits of Australiana that will make you smile with recognition.

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Shivering in anticip…ation.

Actually, it was rather warm so I was perspiring gently with anticipation, but that doesn’t have quite the same ring.

Before the movie started, we were treated to a short claymation film made by three of my classmates from FTI’s animation course.

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The … ah … opening credits for the introductory short.

The client brief stated that it was OK if the short ended up looking “really, really crappy”, but I still think it has a certain charm. It took two days of hard work to make, not to mention a lot of admirable restraint. (Do you know how hard it is for talented artists–trust me, I’ve seen their normal work–to make something that looks crappy?)

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A still from the introductory claymation. I would have liked to insert the actual film here but my blog editor doesn’t like .wmv files, for some reason.

Hurrah for Daniel, Miles and Crystal! (That’s Daniel Kristjansson, Miles Hansen, and Crystal Bradley.) And special thanks to our training facilitator, Ebbie Williams, who came in on the second day to help (above and beyond the call of duty) and then spent hours putting it all together in post-production.

The idea and the voice (now with extra grunting!) were provided by Christian Horgan from the ABC. He is the man with the elegant head sitting on the right, in the picture below.

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At last–Q & A time! (From the left: Mary and Max producer Melanie Coombs, director and writer Adam Elliot, and presenter Christian Horgan.)

This was my first film Q & A, and I made some quick notes so you can share in the goodness too:

CAUTION: SPOILERS AHEAD

Adam:

  • On how he comes up with his stories. “I tend to start with the details and then work backwards.”
  • Adam described himself as “a very impatient film maker”. “I try to create really dense films … so when [the audience] leave the cinema, I haven’t wasted an hour and a half of [their] lives.”
  • “Even though there’s a lot of dark matter, I try to make the ending as hopeful as possible … If I really wanted to make it dark, Mary’s baby would have died and Max would have been eaten by his pets!”
  • He strives to create characters that are “authentic and believable”, saying, “I want you to be moved by [Max],”  and, “We make ‘clayographies’.”

Some interesting making-of information:

  • Miles asked how smoke was created, and Adam replied that they used black velvet and coiled white wire, carefully rotated and shot frame by frame to add transparency.
  • Making water and waves: most of the water, in glasses, fishbowls, toilets, was actually clear lubricant. To make ocean waves, about 50 tubes of lubricant (!) was emptied onto a sheet of Perspex, and then cellophane was laid over the top. The cellophane, plumped up with lubricant, was poked and prodded to look like waves. A frame would be shot, the cellophane would be manipulated again, they would shoot another frame, and so on.

Melanie and Adam specially thanked Perth animators and crew who had worked on the movie, mentioning Pierce Davison, who was in the audience.

I also learnt some Q & A etiquette for next time. These scientific observations have been derived from watching the audience, listening to the types of questions asked (and the responses to these questions: formulaic? Excited? Pithy?), and my rising or ebbing blood pressure.

  • Do some research before attending the Q & A. Go to the film’s website, Google the film title, and read interviews. This will help you with the next bit.
  • Come prepared with questions that have not already been answered by the website, or in interviews. There will be many people in the audience who will be bored (OK, maybe just me), and using their imagination to quietly stab you (again, maybe just me). You are talking to the film’s creators in REAL LIFE. They are your captives. Now is the time to ask them any questions that were not in the sanitised press release; hard, gritty, unusual, burning questions!
  • Hmm, how to put this nicely … compliments are nice, but do keep them short, and for the love of [insert deity] please do not say things like, “This is such a wonderful film. I like how wonderful the characters were. My question is: how is it that you are so wonderful?” AAARGH.
  • On the other hand, any question is better than an uncomfortable silence (it’s OK, there weren’t many).

But really, it was a fantastic experience, made even more enjoyable by the presence of good friends and colleagues. I’ll end with a rather nice quote from Melanie:

Friendships sustain all of us, all through our lives.

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Update (April 9th, 2009): The ScreenWest News and Events page has a short interview with Perth animator Pierce Davison, who was invited by Melanie to work on Mary and Max. Read all about it here.

Source: ScreenWest News and Events page at http://www.screenwest.com.au/go/news-and-events/news-articles, posted April 8th, 2009.

More grist for the ideas mill

April 3rd, 2009

Here’s another place where you will find real-life anecdotes to inspire you: (The Customer Is) Not Always Right at http://notalwaysright.com/

I mean, just check out these two gems:

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Pharmacy | Pittsburgh, PA, USA

Customer: “Hi, I have a rather simple question to ask you.”

Me: “Sure thing. What can I help you with?”

Customer: “Hypothetically speaking, if I wanted to make someone sleep for a really long time, what would I use?”

Me: “Um, just how long are you talking?”

Customer: “Well, I was thinking somewhere around forever.”

Me: “…”

Recipe For An Interesting Evening
Retail | California, USA

Female Customer: “Hi there! Where do you keep your ping-pong balls?”

Me: “Right over here.” *walks her over to them*

Customer: “Oh great! Now, where do you sell your Vaseline?”

WA Screen Awards post makes an appearance on the FTI Scene Stealers page

April 1st, 2009

This is not an April Fool’s joke–my post about attending the 22nd West Australian Screen Awards (read it here) made a guest appearance on the FTI Scene Stealers page, and I’m thrilled about it!

Drawn to Life by Walt Stanchfield

March 29th, 2009

Oh dear, another book to add to the giant wish list of Animation Books That I Must Have.

I will quote Stanchfield’s Wikipedia blurb here, because it will tell you all you need to know, much better than I could:

Walt Stanchfield (1919-2000) was an American animator.

Stanchfield was born in Los Angeles [1] and began his career in animation in 1937 at the Charles Mintz Studio. He served in the U.S. Navy during World War II, then worked at the Walter Lantz Studio prior to his lengthy tenure at The Walt Disney Studios. While at Disney, he worked on every full-length animated feature from The Adventures of Ichabod and Mr. Toad (1949) through The Great Mouse Detective (1986).

In the 1970s, Stanchfield focused his efforts on establishing a training program for new animators along with veteran animator and director Eric Larson. Stanchfield held regular weekly drawing classes and lectures for the crew, and among his students were young talent that went on to become prominent figures within the animation industry: Brad Bird, John Lasseter, Don Bluth, Joe Ranft, John Musker, Ron Clements, Glen Keane, Andreas Deja, and Mark Henn, among others.

In the mid-1980s, Stanchfield taught weekly gesture drawing classes for the entire studio. At the end of each class, he grabbed a few drawings that inspired or challenged him, then pasted them up with his typewritten commentary as a handout for everyone in the class. These weekly lecture notes, along with his early writings for the animation training program, are now gathered and published in the two-volume collection entitled Drawn to Life: 20 Golden Years of Disney Master Classes which is published by Focal Press and edited by animation producer Don Hahn [2].

Drawn to Life: 20 Golden Years of Disney Master Classes, Volume 1: The Walt Stanchfield Lectures can be found here at Amazon.

Sources: Wikipedia article found at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walt_Stanchfield on March 29th, 2009. I first read about this book at Cedric Hohnstadt’s blog, URL: http://cedrichohnstadt.wordpress.com/2009/03/02/walt-stanchfields-drawn-to-life/ (posted March 2nd, 2009).

Zoologic by Nicole Mitchell

March 28th, 2009

I can’t claim to be an expert in this area, but I’ve seen a lot of animation and read a lot of books, and this appealing short has the following elements of a successful creative work:

  • It all starts with a great story.
  • Leave in only what’s necessary, nothing more.
  • Show, don’t tell.

We also had a life drawing class at Perth Zoo recently, and it gives me a thrill to see the lemurs, penguins and bats again (and in cartoon form to boot)!

Ladies and gentlemen, it gives me great pleasure to present Zoologic by Nicole Mitchell:

Sources: embedded video from Youtube at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ePMK3FeyYxI. I first read about this film at Lost At E Minor, URL: http://www.lostateminor.com/2009/03/27/zoologic/ (posted March 27th, 2009).

The 22nd West Australian Screen Awards

March 22nd, 2009

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Jan Stewart, Chief Executive Officer of LotteryWest, and Russell Woolf at the 22nd West Australian Screen Awards.

I was fortunate enough to attend the 22nd West Australian Screen Awards on Saturday night. Actually, my entrée to this glistering event was due to sweat rather than luck: I volunteered to be a runner on the day, in the hope that I could watch some of the ceremony while performing my duties.

So I ran errands in and out of the Octagon theatre, got soaked cleaning crusty 40-gallon drums that would be reborn as golden cocktail tables, and did some speed-typing on a Macbook (why is there no right mouse button, Apple? WHY?)

At the end of it all (including some exciting last-minute wrist-banding duties), I had a shiny WASA ticket (RRP $70, including two hours of quality booze and finger food) in my grubby little hand, and scrubbed up to watch the ceremony.

In the fracas before the show, I also got to meet Diana Warnock, a gracious and charmingly un-snobby lady, who would present the Bill Warnock Award to Meg Shields later that evening. She looked very glamorous in a black and purple ensemble that she said she had just “thrown together”. I can only pray that I will look that good in a few years.

Matt Lovkis and Ash Gibson-Greig opened and closed the show with slick musicality. I thought their closing number was a little risqué–it was a rousing tribute to all the people who didn’t win WASAs, but the audience were in good spirits, so all’s well that ends well.

You can read more about the 22nd West Australian Screen Awards at the FTI website, which also has a list of this year’s winners.

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Shani (in the right hand pic) and I thought we’d practise our red carpet poses in the picture area. You know, for next year. (We can dream, can’t we?)

Looking for ideas?

March 19th, 2009

If you’re racking your brains for film or illustration ideas, may I introduce you to the site F*** My Life? (Caution: site contains the F-bomb, and quite possibly a few other bombs as well.)

People post short anecdotes about some event in their lives that has gone horribly, or hilariously wrong, and end the story with the tagline, “FML”. If reading through the entries doesn’t make you think, hmm, I could totally steal that for my next film, at least you’ll get a laugh.

Source: I first read about this on Boobs, Injuries and Dr Pepper at http://boobsinjuriesanddrpepper.blogspot.com/2009/03/why-have-i-not-seen-this.html (posted March 18, 2009)